Reality is composed of the appearances and experiences existing as they always do to comprise the material world as we see it without our ideas and judgements mutating the way things have always been.
This seems very philosophical, but make it a little more clear. Maybe someone could argue that our ideas and judgements actually do define our reality rather than mutate it.
A bit confusing, people might try to understands what your trying to say instead of arguing about it. try to make it a bit more understandable for your audience.
Your definition is extremely confusing. Don't use "we" or "our." Try a format more like, "Reality is ____ because _______." Clarify your definition and qualifiers.
Like most have noted, it is a little confusing. It seems like you try to put alot of ideas into one sentence and eventually loose the reader. Try simplifying things
I am a little confused, and I am not sure it is very arguable.
ReplyDeleteThis seems very philosophical, but make it a little more clear. Maybe someone could argue that our ideas and judgements actually do define our reality rather than mutate it.
ReplyDeleteI'm a little confused by the simple definition. What do you mean by "as they always do"?
ReplyDeleteI like this definition but it's a little confusing. what do you mean by "as they always do" and "the way things have always been"
ReplyDeleteYou are very specific which is good, but it is a simple definition. It should be easy to understand and read.
ReplyDeleteAre you sure we "mutate" our reality? What if the people are followers and not leaders, who are they mutating their reality too?
ReplyDeleteI'm a little confused, I think you got too complicated with your wording. I would also define what "material world" might mean?
ReplyDeleteTo me, this is really confusing. I had to read it a couple times, and still wasn't completely sure of it. Clear it up and I think you will be good.
ReplyDeleteI don't understand what you are trying to say. Also, don't include personal pronouns like 'we' or 'our.'
ReplyDeleteA bit confusing, people might try to understands what your trying to say instead of arguing about it. try to make it a bit more understandable for your audience.
ReplyDeleteYour definition is extremely confusing. Don't use "we" or "our." Try a format more like, "Reality is ____ because _______." Clarify your definition and qualifiers.
ReplyDeleteI do not really understand this...its quite confusing, I can't tell the difference from the simple definition or qualifiers.
ReplyDeleteIt is a little confusing to understand. Some might argue that reality is different to each person and that our judgements do affect our reality.
ReplyDeleteThis definition just needs to be clarified. I feel like I don't know what you're trying to say here.
ReplyDeleteLike most have noted, it is a little confusing. It seems like you try to put alot of ideas into one sentence and eventually loose the reader. Try simplifying things
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